I think that you used the correct pictures to go with the words in the poem, though I thought you could have possibly used slower music. As you thought, the poem is quite short and I thought you would have done a longer piece. Also you used two very similar pictures of they sky at the start, and I think you could have change one of them. Overall I think it was an ok video, but you could have done a few minor things to really improve it.
I really like the way you've done this; the pictures sort of flow together and the music fits the poem, and all the pictures relate to the line of the poem. I also really like the poem you've chosen. You have given quite an in depth conclusion about the poem, but you haven't made any credits, like what the music is called etc. Overall I think it's really well done.
I think that you used the correct pictures to go with the words in the poem, though I thought you could have possibly used slower music. As you thought, the poem is quite short and I thought you would have done a longer piece. Also you used two very similar pictures of they sky at the start, and I think you could have change one of them. Overall I think it was an ok video, but you could have done a few minor things to really improve it.
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you've done this; the pictures sort of flow together and the music fits the poem, and all the pictures relate to the line of the poem. I also really like the poem you've chosen. You have given quite an in depth conclusion about the poem, but you haven't made any credits, like what the music is called etc. Overall I think it's really well done.
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